Disputed facts and positive defence case

A proposed defence statement for Amir Shah says only: “The prosecution account is denied in full.” The prosecution case is that Amir entered 18 Vale Road through a rear window at 22:10 and removed a camera. Amir accepts entering the garden but says he never entered the house and left after seeing the broken window. Diagnose the two essential drafting moves missing from the proposed sentence.

Draft one focused clause, amendment or diagnosis.